1. She claims, she was playing Frisbee with her Friends at the park. When the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no were. The police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.
2. Today i finished my News Report that i did on Thursday. But now im workin on this .
3. It didnt change my mind. But i think of high school better.
4. I did not watch the hole movie.
5. I do not like to write books or paragraphs.
6. Actually I found the movie very entertaining cause I understanded all of it.
7. I think they're targeting people who would think what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.
8. Pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.
9. I write good enough that you can read it with perfec grammer.
10. I dont write that much but im prity confident about my ability.
11. The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it shows us that anyone can write.
12. Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other.
13. I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then i ran out of time so just a few minutes ago i just finished it.
14. I hope i have a better english experience using the computers.
15. The movie i enjoy most is The Hang Over it was histarical.
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I can see many improvements over the original sentences. On the other hand, there are some errors still. Always be on the lookout for 'i.' It needs to be capitalized always.
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